tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post1906369793559329151..comments2023-09-02T18:12:47.063+05:30Comments on Gibberish Blog - from V.S. Murlidher: Touch & GoStory Tellerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00971617892306934969noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-76407583765566479392008-03-19T19:47:00.000+05:302008-03-19T19:47:00.000+05:30well I do think a while when I develop a story lin...well I do think a while when I develop a story line and subsequently make a screenplay of it, however, when i sit down to write the dialouges, I dont think much but write as it comes & dont change it once written... so it's during the screenplay part where I sit to think, how should I start & how to bring my point into it, and how to end it, (for only few minutes though) i normally want to put it in a way which is light hearted (atleast for me)... and in a usually different way :) so sometimes things which is applicable for me, doesn't do the justice for the readers... thanks for your comments... my story might not be a good standard one, but still it's my kid, and I like it when it comes out :)Story Tellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971617892306934969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-34203093519981209842008-03-18T17:05:00.000+05:302008-03-18T17:05:00.000+05:30good reply but tell me y do u wnt to make ur stori...good reply but tell me y do u wnt to make ur stories an element for commercial purpose, i blv u write what u want to write without keeping in mind u r going to post it on the blog or somewhere else, isn't it so? I dont know whether its right or wrong but as a reader (may be some other readers agree to this too) when i am reading the story of a writer, i try to get a bit of wat author has in his or her mind, what his perception about the topic is and lots and lots of other things.....waise u gave one contradictory statement "Sometimes In making elements for commerical purpose, the film soul get lost... and so my Story... AND "all my stories are first come, first publish types, i.e i dont take time to nourish it or revise it or correct it, it is just posted as it comes to my mind"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-5754659471919637622008-03-17T16:40:00.000+05:302008-03-17T16:40:00.000+05:30well not all love are mature, i have come across p...well not all love are mature, i have come across people who believe they are in love and find it difficult to call each other even as a friend!! Moreover we are not talking about professinal actors here, but people who are young & adolescent, who are acting in college plays...<BR/><BR/>I agree, this story might look immature at times, but this is a story about imamature people... <BR/><BR/>regarding subject dragging, i agree to your point, sometimes In making elements for commerical purpose, the film soul get lost... and so my Story...<BR/><BR/>and yes u r always welcome to share your true criticism, i love to hear them, all my stories are first come, first publish types, i.e i dont take time to nourish it or revise it or correct it, it is just posted as it comes to my mind... i like it that way... to see my mind working / no matter it is bad, rubbish or immature or sometimes by accident good.. :)Story Tellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971617892306934969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-47722496502857934792008-03-17T13:21:00.000+05:302008-03-17T13:21:00.000+05:30Well frankly speaking, i find the subject soooo im...Well frankly speaking, i find the subject soooo immature. I dont know how i would feel when i actually hv to go through a situation where i hv to play the role of a sister in front of someone who i like but i think it hardly matters for actors wat their real life roles are when they are acting but since i hv no practical experience of this so may be this situation can be difficult also but all in all.....i think u r strongly feeling lyk college goer these days thats y so immature subject. I m pretty sure, u wont mind my criticism :)<BR/><BR/>One more thing, i hv read i think 4 or 5 of ur stories and sometimes i feel like the subject u choose is nice and the way u write makes the reader feel like relating himself or herself with the story (Lyk in neha's story) but sometimes i feel like u r unnecessarily stretching the topic or hvnt put the things rightly (lyk in addicted the romeos part). Neways, i think i hv said much :) Keep writing!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-69820593457575221952008-03-17T11:53:00.000+05:302008-03-17T11:53:00.000+05:30no not at all, i have replied you in your inboxno not at all, i have replied you in your inboxStory Tellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971617892306934969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-85181315089744922822008-03-17T11:41:00.000+05:302008-03-17T11:41:00.000+05:30U didnt answer wat inspired u? Hope i m not gettin...U didnt answer wat inspired u? Hope i m not getting too personal.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-15799843179617427582008-03-17T11:36:00.000+05:302008-03-17T11:36:00.000+05:30any kind of comments are welcome :)any kind of comments are welcome :)Story Tellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00971617892306934969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-76963994656184055792008-03-17T11:31:00.000+05:302008-03-17T11:31:00.000+05:30Hi! Well, i am sorry but before saying anything re...Hi! Well, i am sorry but before saying anything regarding your this story, i would like to ask you "what actually inspired you to write this story?" Hope you will answer this if possible and also tell me how well you can take criticism :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-18131494464937780762008-03-14T22:35:00.000+05:302008-03-14T22:35:00.000+05:30"I can't" are sad words in any language...."I can't" are sad words in any language....Aboorvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06277655121435470392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25354297.post-9297295815684870202008-03-11T10:27:00.000+05:302008-03-11T10:27:00.000+05:30Jag(World) ne cheena mujhse...mujhe jo bhi laga py...Jag(World) ne cheena mujhse...mujhe jo bhi laga pyaara...sub jeeta kiye mujhse main hardum hi haara....felt like hummin these lines for Shashank...hahaha...one sided love...uuummm....LOVE alwaz leads to pain...<BR/>Again a stomin story to take away your nerve....wonderfully crafted with a perfect blend of love...insecuirty....expectations...and finally as like every love story...PAIN to someone atleast...hahahah.<BR/><BR/>Gr8..story!!!Keep posting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com