Edhu Sugam? II


Cha rendu kutchi waste panniyachu, olunga patha veika theriyala, Een ippadi kai ellam nadungudhu?

Ah…patha vechachu, kai nadungama vaila irukira cigaratetla veikanum, medhuva, medhuva, medhuva, ayo… cigarette keela vilundhuruchae...

cha… ippadi payandhu payandhu pannina ippadi dhan. Indha road-ae sari kedaiyadhu, orae dirty… inga poi cigarate vilundhuruchae.. cha.. pesama pona pogudhunu keela vilundha cigarette-ah eduthuruvoma? Asingama irukadhu, yaravadhu patha enna nenaipaga, cheap-ah nenaika mattanga? Adhan iruta irukae, yaruku theriyum nambala, pesama kuniju eduthura vendiyadhu dhan!

Ayoo, enna eppadi kevalama poitom, indha thappai nan pannalama!

Kuniju edukaradhuku pathila, pudhusa innoru cigarette vangita pochu…

Annae……ayo…nasama pochu… eva edhuku inga vara…

Eh, unnai yaru ingalam vara sonna……

Edhukuda ippadi erinju vilurae, nana varalai, ammadhan unnai kuptu vara sonnaga……

Ungaloda orae paduthalda…… nee poo… nan varen

Illada amma unnai kaiyoda kuptu vara sonnaga……

Unnaiiii… sari va……

AMMA, AMMA…… emma ippadi paduthurae, edhuku ennai thedi vasathava anupichae, nan dhan varen sonnela!

Dei illada, nee kaalambara saptadhu, pavam unaku pasikumaenu adupula kallu vechuruken, nee dosai sapidaradhukum, stationuku kilambaradhukum sariya irukum, adhan kupten……

Ippo enaku pasikudhunu unn kita sonnena………?

Eh, pathiya… pavam vayithula onnum illa adhan eppadi kathurae, poi kai kala alambitu vaa, dosa poduren……

Cha…orae torture…… sari sari murugala podu……chatni iruka?

Chatniyum iruku, kalaiyila pannina sambara suda vechuruken, mulagapidiyum iruku, unaku edhu venumo adha potuko… vasantha neeyum vaa sapida, neeyum kilambanum paru……

Ennadhu vasathavum enkuda varala??!!! edhalam nan kuptu poga mudiyadhu…… idhukellam vera ala paru……

Dei venkat, pavam kuptu poda, pavam engaeyum pogama veetula summa dhanae iruka…… station poganumnu romba asai vera… kuptu poda…

Amanda venkat, please da ennaiyum kuptu poda……

Cha… station pora valiyil oru dham adikalmnu patha, evanuga namma planaiyae kavuthutaigalae…

Dei ennada yosichikitu iruka…… seekiram sapdu… appuram dosa Aaripochunu solladhae!


Venkat, kelambalama…?

Eh irudi, nan poi bathroom poitu varen…

Hahaha……

Enna siripu vendi iruka idhula… emma dosai sapta udanae coffee kodukathaenu sonna kekuriya…… paru ellam pressure!

Poda poo, unaku vayithula poochi adhan……

Eh valu…… unnai appurama pathukaren!


Ayya pichai podugaya, rendu kannum theriyadhu pichai podugaya……

Amma.. poo vangikiriya mah… mullai poo… malli poo…pichi poo……

Endha busla-da ponum?

Ah.. City Busla…

Dei periya lolu sabhanu manasula nenapu…nan bus numberai ketten…

Eh… chumma irudi, summa thona thonanu…… varum podhu solren…

Unaku ennamo achu… sayangalathirlirundhu nee mood out…ennanu dhan theriyalai……



Eh ennachu, en eppadi irumikitu iruka…

Dei andha pasanga pinnadi dhum adikuranga, adhan moochai adaikudhu……

Nee indha pakkam vaa……

Een dhan edhai pidichitu alayirangalo theiryalai…… konjamavadhu aduthavangalai pathi yosikarangalanu paru…

Eh…dhum adikaradhu avan avanoda ishtam, namba adhalam kanduka kudathu…… sari adho andha bus varudhu paru, adhula eru, nalla velai kaleeya dhan varudhu, utkara seat kedaichidum……thank god!

Venkat enaku dhan ora seat……

Haha… sari utkar……

Ama unaku cigarette pidikaravangalai kanda pidikadha?

Aya, enaku avangalai pathalae kumatikitu varum……

Idhula enna iruku, idhuku poi edhuku ippadi alatikura?

Poda Brindha solradhu correct dhan, nee thayir sadham dhan…… unaku ponnugalai pathi theriyalai…
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Smoke panravangalukum chinna kuladhaikum enna vidyasam, kuladhai kaiya sapudhu, evanuga cigarettah sapuranga…… So ponnugaluku ambalaiya dhan pidikum viral soopura pasangala illa...

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Actualah evanugaluku ullae edho oru problem..adhai theeka theriyama dhan idhalam panraga… infact eppalam cigarete pidika thonudho, appalam evanuga vai sapina pinna indha cigarette pidikaradhae thonadhu…

Ennadi ularae……

Amanda venkat, idhu unmai dhan, actualah ullukula edho tension, nervous-ah irukanuga, adhai eppadi solve panradhunu theriyalai, adhu theriyama adhai marakaradhuku dhan indha cigarette, adha pidicha konjam relax-ah irukira madiri thonum ana, marupadiyum adhae problem marupadiyum cigarette, idhuku oyvae kedaiyadhu…

Periya lecture kodukare...?

Haha..idha nan sollela oshovae soli irukar, so evanuga mudhala manasukula poi enna problem, unmaiyana thevai ennanu purinja pinna ella problemum solve ayidum, adhuku pinna adhai pidikanumnu ennamae varadhu!


Ticket ticket, appa ticket eduthacha… silraiya kodupa…


Ana..ennna…smoke panradhu oru style…oru mathipa irukum…namba rajni sir madiri…

Mannagatti, yaar sonna, Rajni panraruna avaruku kasu varudhu panraru, avaraiyae kelen, neega dhanushku cigarette pidikira palakam irundha sandhosamanu? Infact rajniku matum indha palakam illama irundha innum romba personality-ah irupaar theriyuma…… avarae dhan dhyanam pannuganu sonnar, adhai yaravadhu follow panragala? Never…! ponnugaluku smoke panra pasangalai vida unnai madiri thayir sadama irukaravana dhan prefer pannuvanga…

hehehe...I can’t accept this!

Eh losu, nanum ponu dhanda… Periyava sonna perumal sonna madirinu edho oru padathula kismu solvanae adhu madiri, nan sonna ella ponnuga sonna madiri… Nee ippadi irundha dhan unnai ponnuga like pannuvaga!

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Infact ennoda groupla irukira pala ponnugaloda brothers cigarette pidipaga…pavam adhai nenaichu ennoda friends romba regret pannuvanga, appalam enaku unnai pathi nenaika perumaiya irukum, ennoda annan cigarettae thoda mattanu perumaiya solluven, udanae avaluga podi romba dhan peethikadhaenu solvanga…hahaha…

(vasantha solradhu correct, namakula edho oru problem iruku, edho oru thedal iruku, adhu puriyama dhan cigarete pidikanumnu thonudhu, indha stylekaga pidikuren ellam chumma eyewash… thanks vasantha… nan ippo clear-ah iruken… … nalaikae unaku oru nalla jeans-ah vangi tharen……)

dei venkat ennada yosanai……

Ah…onnum illai……

Jilu Jilunu nalla kathu varudhula… sugama iruku……malai varum pola iruku....

Ama…… nee solradhu correct… sugama dhan iruku……(unmaiyana sugam)....



5 comments:

வேதா said...

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Sasiprabha said...

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Delhi_tamilan said...

Veda: :)
Sasi:Thanks for your valuable comments... I'll surely try my level best!

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