Idhu Muraiyo II

Ahlo Nan dhan brindha pesuren, ennachu, evalavu neram wait panradhu?

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enadi eppadi solrae, ayo munnadiyae solla vendiyadhu dhanae?

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oru arai mani neram mavadhu vandhutu poga kudatha?

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Illai illai, avalavu neram ennala inga wait panna mudiyadhu, nanum kelamburen, unkita appurama pesuren, bye!

Cha, evalum vara mudiyadhunu sollita, appa kelamba vendiyadhu dhan, ana engae poga?

Basker Calling endru mobile thimiriyadhu!

Ah ahlo…

Ah brindha, nan basker pesuren, lunch time over ayiducha?

Ah, achuga achu, ippo, ippo dhan sapitu mudithen.

Sari, enakaga konjam leave solla mudiyuma, nan unkita konjam pesanum?

Leave-ah? Adhu vandhu, saringa, ketu parkuren.

Sari, nee ketutu sollu, engayavadhu veliyil sandhipom, neeyae idathai fix pannu, okya, bye!

Ippo nan enna seiya? cha poi soli poi soli enakae kastama iruku, sari vera vali illai, konjam neram kalithu baskeruku phone panni leave kedaichiduchunu solli ingayae vara solida vendiyadhu dhan!


Hello brindha, vandhu romba neram acha, sorry, konjam traffic adhan!

Parva illaiga, nanum ippo dhan vandhen.

Sari edhavadhu sapiduriya, andha kadaiyila butter scotch ice cream nalla irukum, vayen anga poi sapitu kittae pesalam!

Vendam ga, ingaeyae utkardhukulam ennamo pesanum sonnega?

Ama brindha, unkita kalyanam ana annikae sollanumnu nenaichen ana mudiyala, ana unkita sollama iruka mudiyala, adhan inniku kupiten.

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Brindha, nan solvadhu unaku athirchiya irukalam…, actual-ah nan kalyanathuku munnadi oru ponnai kadhalichen.

ennadhu neegaluma, manadhukul brindha.

Ama brindha, nan avalai kadhalichathu unmaidhan. Ana paru kadhalicha konjam nalaiku appuram dhan nanga unardhom, engal kadhal kalyanathil mudiyadhunu. Kalyanam pannikita nanga rendu perum sandhosama irupomgiradhu unmai dhan, ana nanga mattum dhan sandhosama irupomgiradhu oru kasapana unmai. Kadhalikum poluthu namba manasu dhan nambalai attivaikudhu. Kalyanamnu varum poludhu dhan puthi velai seiyudhu. Nanga neraiya pesinom. Kadasiya nanga rendu perum avanga avanga valkaiyai avanga parents kitayae opadaichidulamnu mudivu pannitom.

Eppadinga adhu madiri mudiyum, ortharai kadhalichu, innoruvarai eppadi kalyanam pannipega?

Brindha nee ketpadhu romba sariyana kelvi dhan. Nadakadhunu oru visayam therinja pirangu adhai patriyae nenaichu nenachu enna use sollu? Nanga seidha orae thapu, kadhalikaradhuku munnalae idhai patri yosikadhadu dhan, ellarukum irukum andha weakness engalukum irudhadu, andha sugama unarvai adakavum adhai patri yosikavum engaluku appo theriyalai. Ana nanga marupadiyum innoru thapu seiya virumbalai…

Sorry ga, neega solaradhu ennala ethuka mudiyala, andha ponnu ungalai marandhu eppadiga innoruvarai kalyanam seidhuka mudiyum?

Brindha, nee emotionala yosikira, nanga practicala yosichom. Sila karanathinala engal kadhal kai kudathunu therinja piragu, adhai patriyae yosichu engaluku irukira indha life-ah edhku keduthukanum? Indha valkai inimaiyanadhu, evalavu iruku idhula parka, anubavika, sadhika, something beyond words brindha, so we don’t want to waste our entire life just thinking of one false relation!

Ana kalyanuthuku piragu ungalala andha pennaiyo illai andha pennuku unga yapagamo varadhunu ungalala nichayama solla mudiyuma basker?

Kandipa varum brindha, nan marukala, ana andha ninaivugal nalaga nalaga oru Distant memory-ah agi vidum, anal mukiyma andha ninaivugalal enaku ipoludhu kedaithurukira valkaiyai nan keduthuka matten,unaku unmaiya irupen brindha.

Ana basker neega enkita sonna madiri unga kadhaliyum avanga kanavar kita sonna, avar eppadi eduthupar?

Brindha, elarum thapu seiranga, andha thapai seidhu unaranum. Adhu thapunu unardha adhai marupadiyum seiyama irukanum adhu podum. Ana seindha thapai ellam nama appa amma kitayo illai husband wife kitayo ellathaiyum opikanumnu kedaiyadhu.

Adhu aval kanavaruku seiyira dhrogam illaiya?

Ennai porutha varaiyil adhu dhrogam illai, palasa nenaichu ipoludhu kaiyil irukum valkaiyai kai vita dhan thappu. Unaku inimel unmaiya illamal irundha adhu thapu, unnai marandhu avalai nenaicha adhu thapu..

Appa enkita mattum en sonniga?

Brindha, enaku unmaiyilae unnai romba pidichuruku, enaku nee rombavum practical-ah think panra ponna therinjae, nan sonna adhai nee purindhu kolvaenu enaku nambikai irudhadu adhan sonnen. Adhae madiri avalum ava kanavar kitae sollanumnu katayam kedaiyadhu, valkai muluvadhum sollama irukalam illai piragu sollalam, ennai keta idhai solra alavuku onnumae illainu dhan solven, aval avan kita unmaiya, anba oru perfect wife-ah nadadhukita adhuvae podhum

Appa palasai maraichu pudhusa valkai nadatha mudiyuma?

Brindha nan palasai maraika sollala, maraka solren. Indha valkai namaku evalavo kathu tharudu, adhil edhuvum onru. Adhu dhrogam, thapunu neeyae kutra unarchiyil sagarathai vida, ini enna pannalam, nam life-ah eppadi nalla kondu pogalam, nammal namai sutri irukiravangalai eppadi happy-ah vechukalamnu yosikaradhudan puthisalithanam. So brindha, nan solanumnu nenaichadhai solliten, ini nee dhan sollanum, ennai nee ethupiya brindha?

Basker, enaku enna solradhunae theriyalai..nan…

Nee onrum solla vendam, ennai nee manicha namba innum konja neram inga irukalam, illati veetuku polam, nan unnai kataya padutha maten. Take your own Time Brindha!

Siridhu neram kalithu, Basker nan onnu keta thapa eduthuka mateengalae?

Sollu brindha, edhuvanalam thayangama sollu?

Basker, enaku Butter scotch venum, adhuvum cone-la..

Hahaha..Brindha..i love you brindha, idho eppo vagitu varen.



Brindha, dei innum ennai yosichu kitu iruka, nalaiku office poga vendam, paduma…

Illanga enaku thookam varalai.. neega dhan nalla paduveegalae, edhavadhu oru patu padugalaen?

Sari, unakaga oru pattu, indha patu enaku romba pidicha patu, palaya pattu ana artham ulla patu…indha patu unakaga….


Uravugal thodargathai
Unarvugal sirugathai

oru kadhai endrum mudiyalam,
mudivilum onru thodaralaam ,iniyellaam sugamae

Un nenjiley Baaram Atharkaagavey naanum
sumai thaangiyai maaruvaen
Un kanngalin oaram etharkaagavo eeram
kanneerai naan maatruvaen

Vedhanai theeralam, Verumpani vilagalaam
Vennmegamey pudhu azhagiley naamum inaiyalaam


Vaazhvenbadho Geetham valargindratho naadham
naalondrilum aanandham

Nee kandatho thunbam, Ini vaazhvelaam inbam
suga raagamey aanandham

Nadhiyiley pudhuppunal kadaliley kalandhadhu
Nam sondhamo indru inaindhdhdhu inimai pirandhadhu


Uravugal thodargathai
Unarvugal sirugathai


Ahlo, yaru Vaishnavi Madamgala, nan Basker pesuren, sorry ungalai indha nerathil disturb panniten!

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Ah, ava nalla iruka, ippo thogitu iruka.

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Ayo, nan dhan ungaluku Thanks sollanum, Brindha en eppadi irukiranu ungakitae vandhu ketapo, enmel nambikai vechu brindhavoda kadandha kalathai pathi sonnega, nanum yosichen, ava mela endha thappum irukira madiri enaku theriyalai. Ana enna avalai sari seiyaradhuku dhan enaku oru kadhali irkiradha oru chinna poi solla vendiyadha pochu…

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Andha kadhai ellam appuram solren, brindha thogitu iruka, pavam, ungaluku thanks solla dhan phone panninen, inimae avalai pathi kavalai padadheega, ava inimae ennoda Brindha, hahaha… Bye!

Hello Mr. Vasanth, Good Morning!

Good… Good Morning Madam!

Ennai neega Brindhanae kupidalam, sorry anniku konjam tensionla irudhuten, adhan ungakita sariya pesa mudiyalai. Inniku lunch time-la ungaluku problem illaina, unga doubts ellam kelunga, ennal mudinja varai help panren!

Oh..thanks Madam, sorry brindha, Ippo dhan enaku nimadhiya iruku…romba thanks…

Hahaha..it’s Ok, Relax Venkat, lunch time-la meet panalam, Bye!

(all comments are welcome!)

7 comments:

Admirable Existence said...

Good story....
I dont know how, but, I was able to guess that The husband (when he started telling that he had a past story) was telling a lie to help his wife out from the problem.

Delhi_tamilan said...

Thanks for your comments. I was just wondering if this story concept doesn't go well with my readers (hehehe.. not many thankfully).. Anyway too bad that you were able to predict my story, next time let me see to it that you just dont catch me!

வேதா said...

good one. engeyo arambichu engeyo kondu poiteenga. sila idangalil yugika mudiyuthu. appuram mudinja tamizhla ezhutha try pannunga, sila idangalil vaarthaigal vera mathiri pronounce pannum pothu vera(vivagaramana endru padikavum)aarthangal varuthu;)

Delhi_tamilan said...

Actually I wanted my characters (Venkat) of my earlier story to live in every story. So that's why I started it with Venkat as usual and then ended up in projecting Brindha. My attempt was to make each story unique but at the same time have some continuity with my earlier ones! Regarding writing it in Tamil, ayayoo... I too dont have much experience in writing it in such a way. Anyways, I'll try, I still not aware how to do it though?

Gayathri said...

it's a superb story!!i really didn't expected the end!it's incredible how u can explain so truely the feelings of brindha!and the character of basker is also very very good!i think if each girl has a husband like him, there won't be more divorce or more missunderstanding!!!but it seems u give more importance to the reality than the feelings!what u want to say is to accept the reality (even if we don't like it) with a big smile!!with basker it will be easy but in the real life only God knows...anyway i love ur writing style... hope u will understand me....

Delhi_tamilan said...

Thanks gayatri for your detailed comments...Well, if the going gets tough, the tough gets going.. Feelings are important I agree, but it's equally more important that your feelings reflect the true reality at times!

karthi said...

romba nalla irunthathu